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lil  ·  4077 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: No Te Amo - Pablo Neruda

beezneez - I love your translation -- lines 6-7 make much more sense to me now. And this line:

   so close that your eyes are closed in my sleep.
I understand that feeling of closeness, as if my blood coursed through another's veins.

Let me know if you take up translating poetry.





beezneez  ·  4076 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Thanks! If you have any to suggest, I would lovingly do it in what spare time I have.

lil  ·  4074 days ago  ·  link  ·  

as a result of this conversation, I'm going to off to hear this lecture instead of working.

Lecture by Translator in Residence Peter Cole

humanodon  ·  4074 days ago  ·  link  ·  

That looks like a cool lecture. I have always wondered what the process of translating poems between two disparate languages would be like. Even between Spanish and English there are shadings and connotations from what at first glance appear to be straightforward translation.