Does this count?:

hi every1 im new!!!!!!! holds up spork my name is katy but u can call me t3h PeNgU1N oF d00m!!!!!!!! lol…as u can see im very random!!!! thats why i came here, 2 meet random ppl like me _… im 13 years old (im mature 4 my age tho!!) i like 2 watch invader zim w/ my girlfreind (im bi if u dont like it deal w/it) its our favorite tv show!!! bcuz its SOOOO random!!!! shes random 2 of course but i want 2 meet more random ppl =) like they say the more the merrier!!!! lol…neways i hope 2 make alot of freinds here so give me lots of commentses!!!! DOOOOOMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <--- me bein random again _^ hehe…toodles!!!!!

love and waffles,

t3h PeNgU1N oF d00m

I think this is my problem. I'm such a freak about sentence structure, I'm constantly rereading and getting caught up on it. I'll definitely be taking this advice next month, thanks so much!

Wow thanks so much. I'll definitely be utilizing these things. I feel like I'm normally a pantser, which is why I mostly stick to short stories, but I've attempted novels a few times and it never seemed to work for me. I'll be getting my plotter on this time, hopefully it will work out better. Thanks again!

But what if, since they haven't seen anything to compare it to, they think that the acting is... good?

I just realized how old this thread is and now I feel dumb...

Well I mean... gotta drop a shout out for candy crush. I have a heroine level addiction with that shit. Also, I'm a "weirdie" so Sleep as Andriod, I wake up a lot easier now.