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thenewgreen  ·  4116 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Story Club pt. XIII

    What had at first, appeared to be fog, was in fact the ghostly exhalation of thousands of the beasts.
-I love this line. Great work pushing the story along, using existing characters and items in the previous parts. Awesome job!




humanodon  ·  4116 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Thanks!