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sirwfc718  ·  4227 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Today's Writing Prompt: "Heaven Is a Corner Store/That Went Out of Business"

Heaven is a corner store That went out of business, With people still knocking and trying to get in it.

It's a corner store That filed for chapter 11, Since nobody needs junk food when they're sittin' in heaven.

Heaven is a corner store that fanatics still frequent, buying condoms and porn mags while judging with meanness.

Heaven is a corner store where the poor still pay for those things the rest of us consumed, already thrown away.





lil  ·  4224 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Hey Sir - I love your version. When the lines are corrected, it will be easier to hear all the rhymes in it! You can go in and edit the line lengths by putting in double returns. mk is working on a fix for this.

thenewgreen  ·  4224 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Just a heads up that mk is not feeling well and is recovering, therefore this may be a bit longer before being fixed.