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ecib  ·  4272 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: I Fell Asleep with Woodrow Wilson in my Mouth

This is really good. I'm a tough sell when it comes to poetry. Awesome use of space as well.





_refugee_  ·  4272 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I originally saw it in just the text form and wasn't really impressed. But when I saw the book layout, I thought it was much improved. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

ecib  ·  4272 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I was thinking the exact same thing. It's kind of fascinating how much of a difference it makes, isn't it?

_refugee_  ·  4272 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Do you think that's a flaw or a benefit? One could argue either way. As a page poet I am tempted to say it is a bad thing, but if this was, for instance, an art installation, I think it would be acceptable/reasonable that the visual medium is as important as the words.

ecib  ·  4272 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Well, in this case it's a benefit from my point of view. It has a good effect.

    As a page poet I am tempted to say it is a bad thing,

e.e. cummings was a page poet too ;)