I fear I'll sound dense for saying this, but I can't tell if this is a comment or a response poem to thenewgreen's, because it has no line breaks but it does have a rhyme and cadence, accidental or not. Which is hilarious if it is meant as a plain old comment. I wonder how she would have behaved
in my back seat. I regret
not being able to try. Although I would tell you to consider rephrasing the second stanza so it sounded a little less inappropriate to say about a dog, haha.I saw a pregnant pitbull jog
down the highway median
in the rain the other day.
Before I realized what had happened,
I was moving too far past,
and it was headed the other way.
That's just awesome. I actually enjoyed reading it that way. I agree that the last stanza is a bit "dirty".