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littlebirdie  ·  4342 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: I'm a crummy poet, but I'm writing a poem a day for 2013  ·  

poem for January 7

My loss is a hitchhiker, a girl of eighteen with bulging pregnant belly

We ride in silence

She holds her hair in right hand rested against growing baby, long and straight and black and oily





JakobVirgil  ·  4342 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  

We take this car It will be the loss of human rumors pregnant women with children Silence, and her riding Long black and straight, and fat. Recognized for the hair on your head grow a baby.

littlebirdie  ·  4341 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Thank you for being my fellow traveler in this poetry thread, JakobVirgil. You are a dear. And your poetry is wonderful. Here's a badge for your poem, which I love.