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thenewgreen  ·  1951 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: In which I attempt to write a pop song

This is a good pop song. Legit. It has a catchy melody and relatable lyrics. It has dynamics. I too can hear horns and much more. You should flesh it out!

Well done! Onward!!