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user-inactivated  ·  3231 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: A Void: part 2

Perhaps more internal monologue, to translate what the narrator-described surroundings into simple terms. I generally think more words are better in situations like those, as long as they hold the reader's interest, because they slow down the sequence and enhance comprehension.