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onehunna · 3235 days ago · link · · parent · post: hiroshima roaches

if you guys enjoyed this story, i've just produced an audio version that you can listen to here

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_refugee_ · 3235 days ago · link ·

It says the track is private, but I can listen to it. Not sure how/why?

I got like, a full page's worth of prose into writing a short horror story last night. So that was cool.

+discuss+discuss

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onehunna · 3235 days ago · link ·

yup,--haven't officially dropped the story on 406ness.com quite yet. special preview for y'all.

ooh,--a horror short. finish it and post it, i could offer feedback.

+discuss+discuss

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_refugee_ · 3235 days ago · link ·

Ha! I have no idea when it would be finished. First just the writing, then I'd want to polish it. I have a page or so, and I'm pleased enough with it, but I know it's all sloppy first draft repeating bad phrases and such. I could PM you what I've got and wouldn't mind that, but if I'm honest, I don't even know what the big bad evil in the story is going to be yet. All I know is that things are sinister. Which is great, that's what I'm going for. The feeling.