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thenewgreen  ·  3362 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: A Lily in bloom

Your latest rhyme

It blew my mind

It's kind of flirty

Super dirty

A little quirky

Not safe for worky

Rhyming cock with talk

Purists will balk

X-rated lil

is quite a thrill

hope she finds mr. Money

To satisfy her cunning





lil  ·  3362 days ago  ·  link  ·  

The whole poem is called "Scheduling" and was published in Bite Me, a book of poems about love and lust, published in Spring 1997. I guess I haven't submitted it to Hubski ever. I wonder why. (Honestly, I should be pming this to you. Here's the entirety: (By the way, the system is removing my stanza separations. BUGSKI, but including separations when I go into the alternate formatting.)

  I have a slot I want to fill

With someone nice and easy.

Send me please a man who will

(So long as he's not sleazy).

  He must have a lot of class.

Money is a must.

I'd prefer a small tight ass

And a good hard thrust.

  It's best if he's reliable

And hardly ever late.

His body should be pliable

And not too out of date.

  I'd like him to be funny

To charm me with his talk.

He can like my cunny

And I will lick his cock.

  Make him not too famous

or married to a shrew.

I don't want to be discreet

The way I was with you.

  It's true I've many lovers.

I juggle them like balls.

Some slip under covers,

And sometimes one just falls.

  You wanted to be famous,

To win that upward climb.

You told me when you dropped me

I took up too much time.

  But I'll find that replacement -

Though you may laugh and taunt

And I'll be rich and famous

And still get all I want.

dublinben  ·  3362 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Get a room already! :-)

b_b  ·  3362 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Wow, the full version kind of exudes some anger in the way the excerpt didn't. Changes it a lot.

lil  ·  3362 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Yeah, published in 1997, written around 1977 about one of my university profs. Things were different then.

Kind of dates me, eh? Who on hubski was even born in 1977?

thenewgreen  ·  3362 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I was born in 1977

lil  ·  3359 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Same year as Elvis Costello, "My Aim is True" -

thenewgreen  ·  3359 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I'm not going to get too sentimental like those other sticker valentines...

Yeah, it's a great song that is perhaps hitting a little too close to home for you right now. Am I right? Hope you are well pal.

lil  ·  3359 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I was referring to the whole album, but dude - I'm fine. Details soon.

Meanwhile, it's getting better all the time!