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I like how the weather and space changes as Heather's morning progresses and she realizes what is going on. She also has a good character and makes the most out of her situation with that breakfast. It's a nice calm story. I would read it out loud. My background is in storytelling so I always think about how things sound in speech and there are parts that felt a little stiff or lacked a little flow to me. Though, I feel like the fact that you're cranking these out every day can be a bit wearing on the writing muscle, so I'm just impressed the text is there.