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comment by Isherwood
Isherwood  ·  3403 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Today's writing prompt: The Beginning

Excellent beginning. The characters have some actual depth to them and you were certainly able to weave the personalities of Lauren and Matt into the larger tapestry of the scene. There's a great momentum that's been started at the bar and I'm interested to see where it will go.