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comment by veen
veen  ·  3403 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Can I get some no nonsense honest critique of some art?

It seems like you tried to fill the entire page. That is not necessarily a bad thing but your drawing looks very cluttered, with no single object really standing out. I think carefully placed whitespace could make it more interesting, e.g. a less detailed back wall. Go here and go to page 92 - his design rules can easily be applied to drawings.