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lil  ·  3575 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Friday the 13th - February - 2009 - A Personal Story (Click-Thru & Read Text Before Link)  ·  

    You’re cutting your hair. No - not cutting it - you’re shaving your head. It’s a ritual of renewal, of reincarnation. It is like a farmer who lights his fields on fire so the crops grow. Your hair” – he pointed to my head, then tugged his own short tuft of dark hair – “is literally your history. Why do you think they use it for drug tests? It holds everything. It is built up of years and experiences. It is the shed record of your life, but it stays with you forever - unless you do something to it.
I love your character "Dan" and I'm sure there's a lot to be said about hair - I have hair stories myself -- that I won't go into here. The line that really grabbed me was this:
    I live inside my memory. I cannot help it.
because I recently came across these lines, apparently from "an anonymous Japanese poem"

  if there were in the world
      no jeweled chariot
            drawn by a lovely white ox

            what would coax us out
       of the burning house

  of our mind?
(translated by Patrick Donnelly and Stephen Miller)




user-inactivated  ·  3575 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Oh, we're doing hair-related poems? My favorite:

    I whip my hair back and forth

    I whip my hair back and forth (just whip it)

    I whip my hair back and forth

    I whip my hair back and forth (whip it real good)

    I whip my hair back and forth

    I whip my hair back and forth

    I whip my hair back and forth

    I whip my hair back and forth

    Hop up out the bed, turn my swag on

    Pay no attention to them haters

    Because we whip 'em off

    And we ain’t doin' nothin' wrong

    So don’t tell me nothin'

    I’m just trying to have fun

    So keep the party jumping

    So what's up? (yeah)

thenewgreen  ·  3575 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I love the poem, thanks for sharing it.

kleinbl00  ·  3575 days ago  ·  link  ·  

There's a ghost in my heart

I'm not ready to free

It symbolizes me but I'm not ready

I'm scared of the bugs, a millionth of the size of me

staying together for the sake of our memories

that we love and cherish; we can't let them down