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user-inactivated  ·  3747 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: It's All Politics - Political Poems - Kenning Journal

I have to say I don't understand the point of doing what Bill Hicok did to his poem and inserting what come off as completely random line breaks. Maybe it recites better than it reads.

But then I don't like modern poetry a lot of the time for that reason.





_refugee_  ·  3747 days ago  ·  link  ·  

line breaks are a planned future post. line breaks are complicated. i have trouble with them (all the more reason to write about them)

user-inactivated  ·  3747 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Tag me. I'd especially be interested if you write about examples where line breaks are used effectively.