a thoughtful web.
Good ideas and conversation. No ads, no tracking.   Login or Take a Tour!
comment by lil
lil  ·  3817 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Write a poem as fast as you can. No revisions, no caring, just BAM.... Here is my attempt

This is a big share al. Very dark. -- the lines below jumped out at me.

  but what is it worth now?
  Nothing
  When you have nobody to talk to about it,
  knowledge is worthless
I'm curious about what else you write.




al  ·  3814 days ago  ·  link  ·  

You don't understand how happy that comment made me :)

Yeah, I'm kinda borderline suicidal but my emotions jump, and I think a lot- which allows for some very dark stuff, but I am also writing a scifi novel, its both utopian and dystopian, if you're curious I'll be happy to pm you a sample :)

lil  ·  3812 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I'd love to see the opening chapter. Thanks