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user-inactivated  ·  3818 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Write a poem as fast as you can. No revisions, no caring, just BAM.... Here is my attempt

    walk from the car to the stairs
    pluck a little tooth of glass from the ball of my foot
    toss it down the hall for somebody else to find
    
    i dig in my purse for the keys you're already holding
    
    hate this city
    but every place is the same
    
    yeah i guess i could
    help you with that




thenewgreen  ·  3818 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I enjoyed this: "toss it down the hall for someone else to find." -Been there.

user-inactivated  ·  3818 days ago  ·  link  ·  

someone broke into a car in front of my building a week or two ago so now there's enough glass for everyone

thenewgreen  ·  3818 days ago  ·  link  ·  

That was nice of them. Creating glass shrapnel for all. Made for a good poem at least.

user-inactivated  ·  3818 days ago  ·  link  ·  

kinda wish i had done it