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sledge  ·  3817 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: "The Behavior", written by a client of mine about his experience with a bad roommate

The commas, that are so prevalent, in this story, seemingly, sprinkled, with great gusto, make it hard, for this reader, to digest the story, without pausing, in my head, every time, a comma is seen.





tehstone  ·  3817 days ago  ·  link  ·  

It's Shatner-ized English.