1. Note to self, "never take a 25% loan." 2. Interesting concept, death sentence is to get a terminal disease and be "studied" while dying. Like it. 3. Dinner? 4. I enjoyed this one: "tears of pain and joy" indeed. Good stuff! ... I shall continue my reading. I think you should flesh some of these out and share here too. I dig some of the ideas and this type of "snippet" writing seems like it would be a lot of fun to do. I recall that we once had a challenge to create the best "first sentence" or lede for a novel. We should do something like that again. Thanks for sharing!
1-4 were fantastic. (3 was the best) Any one liners on 5-10? Also, thanks for the feedback. Number four, the quarantine zone one was probably among the first I wrote and number one was the most recent. I think its really cool to go back and see how much I've improved. In regards to the first sentence thing, that sounds awesome. A while ago I was exploring the depths of hubski and found the Caribouski from #storyclub and the whole idea of it seemed really cool.