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lil  ·  3965 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Today's Writing Prompt: Don't Touch Me

  Don't touch me
  said the mountain
  to the clouds.
  When you're around
  I feel invisible.

  Don't touch me
  said the teabag
  to the steaming water.
  When you're around
  I lose myself.

  Don't touch me
  said the trees 
  to the wind
  When you're around
  I feel abandoned.

  Don't touch me
  Said the shore to the wave
  I never know whether
  You're coming or going.
  
(just a placeholder)




_refugee_  ·  3963 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I like where you're going with this.

lil  ·  3963 days ago  ·  link  ·  

thx, maybe you can add a few stanzas, or we can do a stanza challenge.