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user-inactivated  ·  3968 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Salt Man Illustrated

I really like that the water gets darker as the poem does, but I really don't like what happens with the text in the later frames.





user-inactivated  ·  3968 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I don't know, I think the fact that it becomes crowded is sort of fitting.

user-inactivated  ·  3968 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Ah yeah I could see that.