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rezzeJ  ·  4065 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Writers of Hubski: Write a captivating first line...

Cool idea, I thought I'd do five too:

1. He let the remark hang feverishly in the air.

2. Joseph had never considered what it was to truly beg for his life.

3. It struck her that the ebbing light from the star could be of spent existence, living on in an alternative perspective.

4. "And you're quite sure about that?"

5. Daniel gazed into the mirrored eyes, searching for confirmation; it seemed so lifelike.





lil  ·  4065 days ago  ·  link  ·  

    "And you're quite sure about that?"

now there's an opening line full of conflict waiting to happen.

rezzeJ  ·  4065 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I was thinking of trying to expand a couple of these into fleshed out full stories.