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lil  ·  4072 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Today's Writing Prompt: Go Outside

Some of my observations from a walk in the park.

Go Outside

1

   On the road
   a bright apple
   too perfect to throw
   a hungry person’s feast
2

   "Le fond de l'air est frais,"
   you say, quoting your French husband's
   observation of fall weather.
   "Under the warm air is coolness" - He means
   Winter is coming.
   
3

   Beneath the chestnut tree
   street rubbed brown 
   chestnut leaves fall first
4

   Niqab-wearing women push strollers
   Behind their eyes, a Mogadishu of pain   
5

   Lying in the park
   Stratus clouds above
   Trees wavering.
   You say,
   “When the sky moves
   It’s hard to tell what’s standing still.”
6

   Two owls
   A raccoon
   A squirrel 
   Each with stuffed-animal eyes
   Carved into a tree trunk.
7

   Two runners
   dog walkers
   men with babies
   Indian moms in rainbow saris
   A man with a camera and his dreams
8.

   A Chinese couple pause,
   Put down their groceries
   And pull out badminton rackets, birdies.
   Laughing as they hit
   Volley after volley
   Before heading home.
   
9

   High, very high
   Gulls swoop.
   “Poetry is a bird,” you say.
   “Prose is a dog
   Snuffling along the path.”
10

   Talking about our daughters
   I say, “Your parents were careless –
   They had no idea.

   Not unlike ourselves.”




thenewgreen  ·  4072 days ago  ·  link  ·  

    "Le fond de l'air est frais," you say, quoting your French husband's observation of fall weather. "Under the warm air is coolness" - He means Winter is coming.

Beautiful. We all know this sensation, it's one of life's greatest imo.