Thanks for the thoughtful response again. 1) I realized that some people may be left disappointed because each chapter will leave the reader with more questions than answers. That is not necessarily something I can fix... however, I know for me personally that the unknown just interests me. I hope that the unknown will appeal to others as well. The book will be designed to make people think about the things that we need the next generation to think about! Otherwise they will always be mysteries! 2) There will definitely be visuals. My animator for The Advanced Apes YouTube channel will be doing illustrations throughout the entire book! 3) I will definitely attempt to incorporate more personal info and a stronger personal narrative from myself. I would love for people to see my personality in the book and finish knowing a lot about who I am as a person and not just as a scientist. Definitely don't shut it! I love the feedback!