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humanodon  ·  4272 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: I Fell Asleep with Woodrow Wilson in my Mouth

I read this on reddit too. I have to say, I'm really anal about line breaks and I agree with the redditor that made a quip about these particular line breaks being arbitrary. I think in many instances the current breaks weaken the lines. I do find it interesting and it takes me into a strange place, but I wonder what Woodrow Wilson and the thread of homosexuality throughout the poem have to do with anything.