Anything that you believe will improve my writing not for your taste solely, but for what you see as good writing in general. English is not my first language, and so it's no wonder I have quirks like this popping out. Tenses are among the troubles I have in English - I don't believe I've got it still, despite years of learning and exercising - so if you could explain where I hicced up and why, I would be grateful. Do you have any platforms in mind? I'm not familiar with the online self-publishing world. I've tried Fanfiction.net - thought of it first thing because it fits the subject - but found one aspect of it annoying enough to leave it immediately: I couldn't insert proper double paragraph breaks into the final text, no matter what I tried, and neither could I insert the three-asterisk separator - it got deleted after the saving, for some odd reason.I would like to know what kind of feedback you'd find more helpful.