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_refugee_  ·  3401 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Crystal Clear - First Cold I

I haven't finished it. I would like to know what kind of feedback you'd find more helpful. There are some grammar quirks for instance that I noticed but, i know usually writers are more interested in "big picture" kind of feedback than "you have grammar tense shifts here, here, and here."

Yeah, I mentioned it because I did think that unless you had a really specific reason for using that platform I thought you'd be better served (especially if seeking feedback and from Hubski users) somewhere else. And since you already had an account I thought you probably had nt realized, although I did briefly entertain the notion you could secretly be an investor in the platform and this was your secret plot to drive up revenue or page views :)