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Interesting write up. I'm glad to finally see some short story writing on Hubski. Look forward to seeing more content from you! Edit: I see that you welcome discussion. What were you going for with the narrator? I feel like the suicide was rushed and perhaps not explained, or was that what you were going for? His only thoughts pertaining to suicide were that no one had the right to judge him. He didn't really ever think about WHY he wanted to die, which I feel someone who is suicidal would lay out methodically.