Thank you guys for the feedback it is well appreciated and it reenforces what I felt. Although its sometimes hard to be critical of ones own work, the writing process and hearing it all come together is what i enjoy the most. After, I tend to just move onto the next song. Locally every band here seems to all be screemo metal, and i hold the same position as @thenewgreen and @Jeshk0 stated, nothing new coming out just imitation. So i can see my own stuff with a fresher perspective. All the songs are done by myself and then i bring in the singer and drummer later so its more about fun factor! ... and yeah, singer has a decent set of pipes! I seriously think this has been the most realistic feedback yet, just whats needed. Cheers Guys! :)