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lil  ·  4077 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: No Te Amo - Pablo Neruda

beezneez - I love your translation -- lines 6-7 make much more sense to me now. And this line:

   so close that your eyes are closed in my sleep.
I understand that feeling of closeness, as if my blood coursed through another's veins.

Let me know if you take up translating poetry.