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comment by ButterflyEffect

Thanks for giving it a listen! Any recommendations for improving it? In the end I want to rework the lyrics outside of the middle part of the song, and add some more guitar parts over what I have now (with a lot of feedbak/panning/anything else I can think of) to give it more of a textured sound.

I think I'm more suited towards writing stuff that is more slowcore than anything else.





thenewgreen  ·  3664 days ago  ·  link  ·  

No suggestions really, just keep doing what you're doing. Play with feedback, like it's a violin. There, that's my one suggestion.