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thenewgreen  ·  3813 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Kenning Journal - Poetry Out Loud - Elizabeth Bishop's The Fish

"Shapes like full-blown roses" -A line that's stuck with me all these many years since I first stumbled upon this poem. I was 20 and was in a poetry class at the University of Montana. I loved writing poetry back then but felt extremely out of place in the class.

I fumbled my way through the course and was happy to know that I'd likely be getting a good grade so long as I did well on our final.

The final was pretty straight forward, we had to choose a poem and recite it from memory.

I had no idea what poem to pick, so I took our poetry text book and randomly turned to a page. The page was Elizabeth Bishops The Fish.

Doh! Why couldn't it have landed on a shorter poem? I memorized it and read it successfully in front of my peers and professor.

Ever since then, I have had a fond affection for the poem and as I get older I can relate to and feel even more admiration for that fantastic fish.

Great poem and a very nice reading.

We say the word "venerable" differently :)





_refugee_  ·  3813 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Thank you tng. I'm glad you enjoyed this, like I said on soundcloud I thought of you telling me (a long time ago now) that you would sometimes play these poems for your daughter when I recorded this. The Fish is quite long though, that's the only reason I haven't tried to memorize it, although I have bits and pieces now at least.

I can never read this poem without thinking of my own poetry professor reading it out loud to us at the very beginning of my very first creative writing: poetry workshop.

Also, I fake it, but I actually have the occasional awful pronunciation - gained from a childhood spent reading, not talking, so I knew all the ten-bit words but not how to say them - it's very possible I'm just saying the word incorrectly! I said "affidavit" incorrectly for weeks at my new job before anyone corrected me.

thenewgreen  ·  3813 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Well now I'm curious as to how you pronounced affidavit?

I'll definitely play this poem for my daughter. Thanks for thinking of us!

_refugee_  ·  3813 days ago  ·  link  ·  

aff- ih - dahv - it.

I also have to frequently remind myself that the noun "plow" does not rhyme with "snow."

user-inactivated  ·  3813 days ago  ·  link  ·  

...wait, that isn't how you pronounce affidavit?

_refugee_  ·  3813 days ago  ·  link  ·  

More like aff-ih-DAVE-it I think: listen

user-inactivated  ·  3813 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Well damn. Nobody could be buggered to tell me I've been saying it wrong all this time, it would seem!