OftenBen read this for me before I decided to post it, and he's part of the reason I ultimately did. Both on the blog and here.
He advised I show lil and I confess I'm interested to hear if kleinbl00 has any thoughts.
This is v 2.2 of my draft but it is still not perfect I do not think.
Also sure I think there's some hyperbole here but that's what happens when you speak to emotions.