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wileyfoxes  ·  2263 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Poetry #5

Enjoying your poem(s). But, I want to understand all its nuances, but I need some help on several lines. I will start with one: "Much more sweet than a barrel". What does "barrel" refer to, please.

I love the lines between "the warm smell of cement" to "though my soul does weary" ... the transition from the common things in life to your feelings ... the idea of repentance going on in meetings ...

Lots of stuff to ponder in this poem, but I feel compelled to move on ... my email is tugging at my leg.