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Isherwood  ·  3421 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Writing Prompt: Dialogue only

Good story. I think the restrictions were really tight and you did a good job of building the scene within those restrictions. It did make some of the dialogue a little odd, but it seemed reigned in enough to still fit.

I'm no writer myself, but the dialogue seemed good for the characters and I wanted to see the way things went.