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lil  ·  3820 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Today's Writing Prompt: The fog of love

I love rhyming poems. The only place where there seems to be an extra syllable is the word "appearance." Maybe you can change it to "looks."

The line breaks are not showing up as you intend them unless you put two blank lines where you want a new line.

  Better still, indent
  Two spaces and your
  Poems will look like this.
(Then I'll take another look)