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rezzeJ  ·  3820 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Can you come up with the first line of a novel/story?  ·  

Your advice is valid and it's something I'll remember, but it's much harder to accept when presented arrogantly. I had to spend a minute or two resisting from defending some my attempts, even though I knew you were correct. I was tempted to ignore it at first. And I still felt the need to make this pointless response.