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ooli  ·  3953 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Chapter one of my novel

I'm really sad. Please do not use "Fuck" or any cursing word in your writing ever.

Your character dont sound edgy, and nothing say "I'm a 20-something white male from middle class aspirant writer" like using the word "Fuck". Do not use it. Even when people are actually fucking.

Good luck with your writings. Never stop.