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mk  ·  3998 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Editable Poem #2: What Did We Learn?

I enjoyed it. It's interesting to see what parts of what you've added survive. There some sort of Darwinian feeling to it.

  but it's bowties and trumpet tubing from here on out.
is what happened to part of my addition. It's better than what I started with. I'm game for another. I suspect that the same group of editors would find a groove.