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thenewgreen  ·  4000 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Hubski Collaborative Song #2 with Drums/Percussion -Need Feedback

Alright, I recorded some vocals that I'm not terribly thrilled with. There are parts I really enjoy, but others I don't. The lyrics are trite, but universal:

  Foolish with time
  Careless with this heart of mine

  Waking up
  Getting to the point
  where feet hitting the floor
  Is not a chore anymore
It's not Hemingway, but then he never was much of a songwriter. What are your thoughts fuffle?

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